In my literacy group we are reading a fiction and it's about farmer Chas and he live in a farm in Pongaroa, the nearest place from his farm is one hour away from it.
In wrote all the information I know on a information web that I made and it will tell you more about the story in the book I read.
Kia Ora Heavenly, I really how you have put a farmer and a dog in your post to show what the story is really about and how you have a really nice description at the top. Maybe you can finish or add in your walt propely. But Overall Good Job!
ReplyDeleteHey Heavenly,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you explained everything what happened. The thing that was amazing is your Information web, you told us what animals Chas has!
Next time you could work on is giving me more Information what happened at the end!
Good work!
- Jorja :)
Hey Heavenly my name is Ethan from YMS (yaldhurst Model school).
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have added a picture and the writing as well as the picture.
When I read your post it taught me how to get sheep up the hill.
Why did you chose to do this?
Yours sincerely- Ethan
Thanks for commenting tomy blog post
ReplyDeleteI will try to put more information next time
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