Wednesday, November 6, 2019
Penguin Hostpital
I read a book and it's about a Penguin hospital. It's a true story and it's about different birds that go to the penguins hospital for all sorts of reasons and the reason can include injury's, broken wings and to young to be in the wild.
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Hey Heavenly,
ReplyDeleteI like your poster for the penguins. Your posetr is good but next time you could work on adding more information about penguins, and you could make your writing a bit smaller. I can still understand it!Good job. Keep it up.
- Jorja :)
Hi Heavenly, I really like how you have a little penguin in the middle of your poster. I also like how you have put information on your poster. Maybe next time you could remember that you are not making a poster about penguins and about the story, you are designing a way to protect penguins from dogs and drifting fishing nets.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Heavenly! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Heavenly! I love the poster, Viv looks really cute! I also like how you made the writing really big, and made the colours of the text boxes a good colour that doesn't make it hard to read. Therefore, everyone can read it just fine.
Viv sounds like a really nice person! I mean, she takes in any penguins that need her help! And it sounds like she would even bring a penguin in even in the hospital is already full!
Next time, maybe you could be a little bit more creative and try to make your own picture of Viv!
Keep up the good work!
From Hana
I will remember that next time Denise
ReplyDeleteThank you
Sorry, I couldn't find a picture of Viv but I will try harder next time.
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