In Rm 5 we have been making mindmups to tell you's about the CHARACTER, SETTING, FEELINGS, ACTION, PROBLEM and OUTCOME in our story that we have been reading with our reading group.
Hello Heavenly My Name Is Renae ( I am a year 5 at Yaldhurst Model School) It is cool how you shared your reading. Next time you could do a sumuray to tell us a little more. Great post. -Renae
Hey Heavenly, I liked the way that you explained some things that happened in the story! The part that stood out for me is was the problem and how you told us about that.
Next time you could work on is adding 'For example' where The Setting etc
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Hello Heavenly My Name Is Renae ( I am a year 5 at Yaldhurst Model School)
ReplyDeleteIt is cool how you shared your reading.
Next time you could do a sumuray to tell us a little more.
Great post.
-Renae
Hey Heavenly, I liked the way that you explained some things that happened in the story! The part that stood out for me is was the problem and how you told us about that.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could work on is adding 'For example' where The Setting etc
Good Job, Keep it up
-Jorja
Hi Renae it's Heavenly I wanted to ask What's a sumuray
ReplyDeleteThanks Jorja, i'll check on the setting part after
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