In In my reading group we have task to complete and on of them is to do an infographic, an infographic is something that you design with diagrams and information about the story you have to read in your group and this is what mine looks like.
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Kia Ora i'm Olivia from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteI liked how you explained how tall it can be and that it can also be very dangerous and sometime in volcanos.
You taught me about fire tornadoes because I didn't even know that they existed.
Maybe you could look back and add more facts and also tell us more about fire tornadoes because some other bloggers like me may not know what they are.
Did you post this blog for reading or not?
Kind regards Olivia🐶
Hi Heavenly, It's Mark your friend.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added the picture, which is really cool and it's relevant to the topic of the Infohraphic.
This reminded me of when I didn't know that fire tornadoes exist before.
Maybe you should add more information to show us what they are,and what they do.
Kind Regards
Mark
Hi Heavenly, I am Lucy from Yaldhurst model school. I Like how you tell us why we should stay away from them. Next time cheak the spelling and grammar. I think you did a great job.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work
Kind regards
From Lucy
Kia ora Heavenly, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put lots of information in this amazing blog post. The thing that really stood out to me was the bulls running from it. (Sorry if they aren't bulls I'm just guessing.
This reminded me of just a few hours ago maybe an hour, it was when we did writing. We had to make up similes, metaphors, and personification for storms.
To improve, you could put more colour in it and maybe make the writing on the google drawing a bit smaller and a different font. Apart from that, amazing job, super good!
Did you have to do it on fire tornadoes?
Bye Heavenly! Keep up the amazing, amazing work and keep blogging!
-Amelia 🦊